3,2,1 Go! the moment I had had been waiting for the hole day had finally come the cross country race had came and I was in first but jago and me had a scary encounter so I speed up away from him.The hole track had turd to dagerd sharp rocks so I stuck to the tight path of grass but then i stubbed my toe ahh I screamed as I slowed down into third but the race isn't over.
It was so tiring running in the sand but I was determined to not give up.After a while I dropped down to fifth. As I ran up to a dip I knew this was my time to get speed as I ran down the dip I felt the breeze in my face it felt so nice I also caught up to felix and jago who were battling for fourth jago looked behind and they both speed of into the distance. after one lap I was so close until I was finished so i started gasing it down the track I came fifth place and i'm happy with myself.So that is what happened on cross country for my year.
Hi Olly, wow what a race that was, I wasn't really looking forward to cross country, but those are my feelings, not yours. Was your toe still sore after your race and when you got to school, or did it settle down? I loved how you were determined to keep going and 5th place is better than what I did.l If I were you, I would be proud of myself too. I like how you added tons of interesting words, but maybe next blog you can add more information and punctuation.
ReplyDeleteHey Olly that sounds... well pretty boring put you probably enjoyed it maybe probably not you have a few mistakes like dagerd is jagged.
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