Hi my name is Olly and today I will be telling you about my favorite workshop and why. First of all a work shop is a learning sheshion of either Math,Strand,Writing or reading.
My favorite workshop is strand because we are learning about nets and faces in shapes and we got to make 3D shapes out of paper I was really exited because I always used to make them as a kid I decided to make a Triangular prism.
Hi Olly your blog could use some more writing. Sheshion should be session and you need to add more Commas and full stops. Abhay
ReplyDeleteHi Olly your strand group sounds fun I wish I got to do that in mine but there are a few spelling errors.
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Hi Olly, I really enjoyed reading your blog, because you added lot detail in so little words. From Bramm
ReplyDeleteHi olly your blog can use more info and your blog needs more writing and full sops.
ReplyDeleteHi Olly,
ReplyDeleteI like how you put in "I used to make them when I was a kid". I remember when I made them too. Otherwise I really enjoyed reading your Blog post. By Arthur
Hi olly
ReplyDeleteI like that you added a picture, it reminds me of when I did a really fun strand I did. You also added a lot of detail.
From Harry